Here's another story that I'll never complete. This was one of my earlier works, before I knew anything about pacing, plot, story progression, or any of the basics for being a writer. It's a corpse of random character interactions and stuff that, in hindsight, doesn't make much sense. Enjoy it, laugh at it, do whatever. I just figured I'd get this off of my computer finally. Heck, take it and see if you can't try to fix it. I personally ran into the very common problem of, "Too much of the

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